7 ways to look at blind eyes
Although he may not witness
He can feel
Watch him as he struggles
Through a war from within
Blindly those eyes do not see tragedy
But if not to see it
They must feel it
Sharpened senses
Allows him to wield inhuman capabilities
Realization to why eyes are not a necessity
Your other senses guide you on another path
The aging of your children, your family
You can not vision them maturing
While to yourself you do not age
Lacking pupils
Creates an empty lake of tears
In those tragic eyes.
3 comments:
wow i love it
and a very good topic to work on
i hope to see more <3
wow this is really good parker. you wrote it very insightfully, and really analsized it from every angle. well done! :)
"Lacking pupils creates an empty lake of tears in those tragic eyes." I love that line. The poem is great as a whole, but that line is especially good.
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